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Infinitely Delightful
Contributed by
venkat
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Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
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How great is this pure happiness
When bliss is blossoming and
The dancing dawn on your lips
Turned me into a river of passion
And my blood waves flowed
Towards the ocean of your heart flames
My body like an iridescent bubble rolled
On the flower beds of sweetness and
Burst forth into your wildest laughter
Failed to find the body and the mind
My soul cried like a babe in your lap
And found the blissful beatitude
Then this moon of the butter mound
Burst forth into infinite founts of nectar
Ah, how wonderful is this endless bliss!
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17- 4- 2003
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venkat
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Re: Infinitely Delightful
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 12:19:42 PM AEST
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Oh Venkat, this is wonderful, beautiful, romantic all wrapped into one. Your poetry is wonderful!!
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Re: Infinitely Delightful
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 03:55:34 PM AEST
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My dear friend Venkat, this poem has a way of grabbing the reading and not letting go. Awsome write to bad it had to come to an end.
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Re: Infinitely Delightful
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:48:49 PM AEST
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| exquisite:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Infinitely Delightful
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:52:29 PM AEST
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breathtaking my dear friend
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Re: Infinitely Delightful
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by karoody on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 01:28:21 AM AEST
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the ultimate connection that two souls can have...you have drawn the moment so well with your words...bliss in the strongest sense of the word...
hugs,
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Re: Infinitely Delightful
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:16:08 AM AEST
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Got to shed some of the current load, straighten my back and lift my gaze to share this one with you. It's so beautiful, out of this world.
As my old Grandmother used to say to her (naughty) grandson.......
"There's non so blind as those who don't wish to see"
or
"There's non so deaf as those who don't wish to hear"
She had a saying for everything, but when you think she was born around 1870 it was a much more "ordered" world. People knew who they were.
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Re: Infinitely Delightful
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by venkat on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:53:32 AM AEST
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| Dear friends, Thanks for all your lovely comments..venkat |
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Re: Infinitely Delightful
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by Bizzy on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 10:48:31 AM AEST
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A beautiful, passionate, work of art, venkat.
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