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No Thanks, I'll Smash It Myself
Contributed by
Obnoxious_Bread
on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 10:46:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I know you smashed your skull open
but I wanna feel the pain myself.
I,
so empty of fear,
so unconquered by duty,
so unripe,
and alive
The drums in the distance warn me
of the approaching cliff,
ill fall fast,
ill land hard
A bird in a field of mice,
a coke in a water cistern,
a leaf of grass
growing in the concrete crevice
The drums in the distance warn me,
of the approaching cliff,
ill grow too big,
I wont fit back in
dont tell me to stop acting,
if you want to take off this costume
youll have to rip off my skin
and dissect my brain, heart and sex
The drums in the distance warn me,
of the approaching cliff,
ill make frowns
ill make violence
No I wont take a parachute,
I will not be slowed down,
my soul wont shout freedom,
while my body is to caged
The drums in the distance warn me,
of the approaching cliff,
I think youre scared ill land on your corpse
and live forever
I know you smashed your skull open
but hey, my brain needs some air too
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2010-08-01 10:46:19]
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Re: No Thanks, I'll Smash It Myself
(User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 11:44:47 AM AEST
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Sad...
But I liked it all the same.
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Re: No Thanks, I'll Smash It Myself
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by yvonxsmeets on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 12:50:02 PM AEST
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This is sad poem
But I really like it
well done! |
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Re: No Thanks, I'll Smash It Myself
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by polaris773 on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:49:57 PM AEST
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| A + work buddy |
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Re: No Thanks, I'll Smash It Myself
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 09:24:34 PM AEST
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| i read this a couple of times... the imagery is really vivid, and the emotion shows through... it really got to me, thanks for posting |
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