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Summer Down the Shore
Contributed by
allforyou
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 09:58:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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The summer breeze breathes painfully hot,
upon the lips of the ocean,
while waves do endless cartwheels toward the sand.
Just for a moment, with closed arms,
the clouds shun the sunny weather,
lending loungers a relieving, helping hand.
Meanwhile propped umbrellas mark the beach,
like thumbtacks scattered on a map,
laced with blankets and trailed by shovels and pails.
As a single feather floats,
unphased, above the empty faces,
its frayed, wavering trail leads and catches in the sails.
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allforyou
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2010-08-03 09:58:51]
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Re: Summer Down the Shore
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 12:48:34 PM AEST
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Awesome write.
Every time I hear of or see a feather it reminds
me of the movie of Forrest Gump.
You painted a beautiful word picture.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Summer Down the Shore
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 02:31:36 PM AEST
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| Your words have conjured up a beautiful vision, well writen, well done. |
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