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The Duplicity of My Addiction
Contributed by
allforyou
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Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 10:58:49 AM in AEST
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drugabuse
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You told me I'd always be loved,
you told me I belonged.
That next time would be better,
if I could just hold on.
You spoke to me in dreams,
made sure I would remember,
that without you I am nothing,
that some things are forever.
Now we might not be handcuffed,
but you've got me on a leash.
It makes no difference if I run,
I'm still not free, there's no release.
Suddenly my visions doubled;
You're just like what they said!
Will you and I grow old together,
will you still live once I am dead?
I see you in the mirror,
I know what I must do.
The thing about addiction is,
without me you are nothing too.
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allforyou
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Re: The Duplicity of My Addiction
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 11:20:28 AM AEST
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This is excellent! Well worded and the pain was felt as I read along. Keep it up- 70 days and counting. One day at a time. . .
~Scorp
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Re: The Duplicity of My Addiction
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 01:27:02 PM AEST
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| very well writen, the pain is so real but also well dealt with in this marverlous piece Keep clean and keep writing, good luck. |
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Re: The Duplicity of My Addiction
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by Daniellemarie on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 10:27:00 PM AEST
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| Love your piece, I can relate addiction is such a *****, a devil on our shoulder for the rest of our lives. But on drugs we have no soul anymore or creativity, when I was active i didn't write a thing for months and months you hold a pen to a paper and have nothing good to say. |
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Re: The Duplicity of My Addiction
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by chrisdavid on
Thursday, 5th August 2010 @ 12:03:48 PM AEST
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Sad to hear about your drug problem but great news that you're now clean. I have never touched drugs or drink but know what it does to you. Good write and KEEP CLEAN!
All the best, Chris. |
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Re: The Duplicity of My Addiction
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by gr8tfulldead on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 03:12:36 AM AEST
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| really really well written, very much enjoyed it, and its very much true, keep up the awesome poetry ;) |
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Re: The Duplicity of My Addiction
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by SunshineySam on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 03:50:35 PM AEST
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| congrats on 70 days! Keep it up :D I love this poem. The last four lines are my absolute favorite. so true. |
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Re: The Duplicity of My Addiction
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by eastboyez on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 06:04:33 AM AEST
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| very well written..can relate to it... |
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Re: The Duplicity of My Addiction
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by JohnnyFallen on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 08:14:38 PM AEST
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Don't mind the subject (then again nobody cares about a comment's subject).
I like this poem. I don't know exactly how the feeling is, but I like the words "without you I am nothing". I kind of have that feeling with someone that I'm with right now. Oh, and you commented on my poems a long time ago, but I never remembered your account name until I looked at my poems. So, I'm just returning back a comment and I must say, your poems have interesting titles. I shall read them when I have the time.
- Johnny |
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Re: The Duplicity of My Addiction
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 20th June 2021 @ 02:18:18 PM AEST
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well done
hope all is well with that struggle
I can never break loose
only have moments of freedom
thanx for sharing.... |
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