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who will wash away my sins?
Contributed by
Daniellemarie
on
Thursday, 5th August 2010 @ 10:36:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She looked in my face, and I could see the dissapointment in her eyes.
She asked me if I was okay, and I lied and lied the best I could.
She saw right through me, she reads all my secrets in one glance.
I wish I could tell her, I wish I could hear her approval.
Oh mother can you hear me crying? Mother, can you see
that Im dieing? Mother, theese sins are irreverseable, and
theres more to come. Who's going to wash this blood off my hands?
Who will make my bed that I lie in mother? How did I get so dark,
why did you let me go on my own? Im not ready, im not ready,
I will never be ready in this life.
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2010-08-05 22:36:02]
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Re: who will wash away my sins?
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by allforyou on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 12:47:56 PM AEST
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At 22 years old, I'm not ready for life either and have literally asked my own mother,
"Can you see that I'm dying?" and "How did I get so dark?" and "Why did you let
me go on my own?" and I know it hurts her. It seems that being stuck with myself
and my thoughts is the worst thing for me. So, yeah, this really struck a chord.
Keep writing.
-Kara |
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