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Karma
Contributed by
Daniellemarie
on
Thursday, 5th August 2010 @ 10:51:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You reeled me in on your hook, and spit me out.
You took me for granted, and I let you do it.
I told you from the start, that this was going to
end very ugly. Someone is going to get hurt....
but you disregarded the idea. You played your
stupid games, selfish as you were. Always a
little boy trapped inside a man with a crooked
smile. You burned me out, and I left the door
unlocked for you every night in case you
bothered to show. I hope your sitting in your
pretty corner all alone, drinking your irish whiskey.
Who's alone now?
Copyright ©
Daniellemarie
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2010-08-05 22:51:27]
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Re: Karma
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by allforyou on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 12:49:53 PM AEST
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I love this. Karma's a *****. And precisely, "Who's alone now?"
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Re: Karma
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 03:31:53 PM AEST
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Well the anger certainly comes out in a whirling torrent.
I particularly liked the line
"Always a little boy trapped inside a man with a crooked smile".
I think that one will stay with me for quite a while !!
Maybe he is all alone, reading this and thinking about what you've said.
Steve |
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