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Tatter
Contributed by
navydocny
on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 07:09:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The scream is not heard
Pain you can easily see
Our love was grand
Copyright ©
navydocny
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2010-08-06 07:09:02]
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Re: Tatter
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by HippyWitchGal on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 11:55:35 AM AEST
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| I love how you used the simplicity of haiku to demonstrate complex imagery! |
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Re: Tatter
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by allforyou on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 12:30:30 PM AEST
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I loved every single powerfully simple syllable.
-Kara |
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Re: Tatter
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by emystar on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 02:41:50 PM AEST
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Good work friend.
I hope you have a wonderful, enlightening leave.
Enjoy your leave, have fun with the kids. Most of all be kind to your self.
I really appreciate what you do to keep our country free.
Blessings,
emy |
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