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Painful Tears
Contributed by
Val
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Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Its been a while since I saw you last, I whisper in her ear, My the times sure have past, Over the very painful year.
The tears run down my cheek I cant believe what I see, You used to be unique, But now youre a drugy.
You were once so fine, How can you do this to your body? Now this draws the line, Why did you have to be naughty?
You were once fun to be with You would never quit a game Those fun times now our just a myth You bring nothing but shame.
I reach out my hand, In order to help you But you just take a stand And I try to mention how I have been there to.
Fine, if you dont want my help Than theres nothing I can do. But the next time you scream and yelp I want you to know that I will miss you.
I try to explain, What drugs do to you mind. They slow down the brain And put you in a bind.
They make you smell, And cough and gag The wheezing and coughing will fill like hell Im not just trying to nag.
The fact is Ive been there The drugs almost made me die, It gave me quit a scare Because I thought I would have to say good bye.
If you find yourself at a sudden loss of sight Or if you find yourself out of breath And cant get to sleep at night Beware because next comes death.
Copyright ©
Val
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2003-04-17 19:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Painful Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 07:37:53 PM AEST (User
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great write best wishes too you and your friend. He is lucky to have you behind him
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Re: Painful Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eloise on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 02:59:32 AM AEST (User
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this is a really strong poem, good luck with your friend and i hope he sees what hes doing before its too late |
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