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Realm of the lost
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 08:58:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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All I know
is
something's wrong....
what it is I don't know
but
something is wrong,
life has been this way for to long.
I'm not in control
there's a hole in my soul
and I
feel so low,
I am in A Twilight Zone
and
I just don't know
where I belong
everything feels so wrong.
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unknown_utopia
... [
2010-08-09 20:58:08]
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Re: Realm of the lost
(User Rating: 1 )
by quadira on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 03:03:27 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel. Have been there before. I like the way you write. i can relate to your style. And i think that writing eases your pains a little. |
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Re: Realm of the lost
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 05:40:28 AM AEST
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| can feel the anguish in this,great line there's a hole in my soul and I feel so low, a heartfelt write that many will be able to identify with |
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Re: Realm of the lost
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 09:51:29 AM AEST
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Quite often I find that we are on the same page here.
For once again, my thoughts have become your words.
I am a fan. Keep writing.
-Kara |
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