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poetry
Contributed by
polaris773
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Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 11:46:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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It always starts the same way
With nothing
Slowly the ink saturates
And soon words come
A Word is nothing
Without more of themselves
Ideas are formed
and the message is sent
But without a reader
The end is like the beginning
Copyright ©
polaris773
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2010-08-09 23:46:00]
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Re: poetry
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 03:35:58 AM AEST
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| very well writen, I like this a lot, thanks for posting. |
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Re: poetry
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 04:02:16 AM AEST
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Hmm, interesting ponderings.
-Phil |
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Re: poetry
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 04:34:42 AM AEST
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An interesting reflection on the creation process. Is a poem poetry if it isn't read, just written?
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Re: poetry
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 10th August 2010 @ 09:48:33 AM AEST
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Wow. This is great. I especially liked: "A word is nothing without more of themselves." That's awesome.
-Kara |
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Re: poetry
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by Harsh on
Thursday, 12th August 2010 @ 03:01:11 AM AEST
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this has surely entered in the list of one of my favs
nothing can be so simple yet deep
great work playa'
peace
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Re: poetry
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by tinybitinsane on
Thursday, 12th August 2010 @ 11:03:12 PM AEST
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| the last to lines are like talking to my brother but i love it :) |
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Re: poetry
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by Bexstasy on
Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 07:35:53 AM AEST
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| Trueee |
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