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Loves Sweet Seed
Contributed by
Potpourri
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Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 01:13:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Were you just a woman
even that would be enough,
is not a diamond precious?
when even in the rough.
More than love you like i do
cause you are my wife,
you allowed me to love you
and let me in your life.
Thinking back of now and then
and how it use to be,
i just can't imagine living
without you and me.
But instead you gave your all
to this heart of mine,
were i born a star above
because of you i'd shine.
As a river i would flow
to your open sea,
as a heart i'd love you so
for all eternity.
What is life if not to love
but a waiste of time,
a lonely verse without a poem
longing for a rhyme.
An emtpy place we call nowhere even
in a crowd, where even wispers dare
not speak in fear of sounding loud.
But with you there was no fear and
words we did not need, we simply
held each other near and planted,
loves sweet seed.
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Re: Loves Sweet Seed
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by mehuel on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 01:43:18 PM AEST
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"an empty place we call nowhere.... Where whispers dare..."
good one... Nice peice on true love... |
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Re: Loves Sweet Seed
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by Perfectly_flawed on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 03:57:22 PM AEST
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| Very nice. Simple yet beautiful. Good write. |
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Re: Loves Sweet Seed
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 05:27:57 PM AEST
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This such a tender but very strong write.
But with you there was no fear and
words we did not need, we simply
held each other near and planted,
loves sweet seed
We all can learn from these magic words,blessings,
emy |
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Re: Loves Sweet Seed
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by northernlights on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 01:08:52 PM AEST
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| Even your introduction echoes the respect that is foremost when the language of love is to be heard the words are irrelevant when you can hear the heart beat like yours just beautiful |
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