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A Painted Love
Contributed by
Daylynn_Van_Wyk
on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 12:44:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My eyes to the skies....
My boring life sleeps
beneath this brief moment of paradise,
My hands reach for the clouds
I mold your image upon this blue canvas
especially your smile which levitates my soul
I then add a beautiful sunset
and a warm front to ease the cold,
A bittersweet love is what we endure
So I splash sunflowers to this art piece
Your favourite flowers is what you told me,
So I utilise this smooth gensture
to lure your heart closer
and expose you to this sweet fantasy,
The night bares more romance than day
So i blend this day into tonight
with the stars lit like still fireflies
and a meteor shower
like a passionate waterfall set a light,
I then add myself to this painting
and i place your hand in mine,
We reflect upon the good times
as we hold hands and make our way,
a loverly stroll through this magical place awaits
and for the first time tomorrow is irrelevant
and a love bomb blossoms this day.
Copyright ©
Daylynn_Van_Wyk
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2010-08-13 00:44:35]
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Re: A Painted Love
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 04:07:29 AM AEST
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| hmm nice imagery.."love bomb".. this is the best (lol)!! |
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Re: A Painted Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 06:27:31 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem with soft soft, warm imagery. I especially liked these bits:
'I then add a beautiful sunset
and a warm front to ease the cold,'
Clever use of meteorological terms there.
'So i blend this day into tonight
with the stars lit like still fireflies'
A great image, well crafted.
-Phil
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Re: A Painted Love
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by HippyWitchGal on
Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 07:01:47 AM AEST
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| As a writer and painter, I absolutely loved this! The last line is phenominal! |
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Re: A Painted Love
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by babigurl343 on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 09:20:17 AM AEST
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| i think this poem is really good...its easy to imagine it... |
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