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Rotten Apples
Contributed by
mute
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Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 01:03:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I, an old apple tree, stand tall;
Standing helplessly, watch as my offspring fall.
Staring in fear, watch children run;
Round and round they go,
Plucking apples just for show;
Devouring my children just for fun.
Licking their tears like beasts;
Snickering, What a delicious feast!.
Roaring with a powerful laughter,
Shamelessly consuming my daughter.
Faster and faster they pick,
Sharper and sharper they rip.
One more baby to snatch. Pluck!
One more corpse to bury. Chuck!
I, silently yelling, Please dont! Please!
Watch as they begin to leave.
Evil laughter fades into the air,
As I uselessly stand bare.
Surrounded by a cemetery of rotten apples,
I quietly cry for my babies.
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Re: Rotten Apples
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Sunday, 15th August 2010 @ 05:27:27 PM AEST
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It took me a few reads before i realized what it was really about, but once it sunk in, i enjoyed it.
Nice work. |
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Re: Rotten Apples
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 03:13:17 AM AEST
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| A very enjoyable read. I love the way this flows so effortlessly. Well done. |
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