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Detached
Contributed by
zeberdee
on
Monday, 16th August 2010 @ 01:53:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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For you it all just came to soon
a masked being walking beneath the moon
Spending another silent night in the woods
I Never said it was gonna be good
Its never been bad, but its always been true
And when you realize that you begin
you cut it of cause you cant see through
and its to much for you to take on the chin
Now theres a masked being in your place
Instead of eyes of peace and lips of tranquil
an angry relentless mask has taken your face
with its cold and evil star from a cold and empty hill
you tell yourself that you had to do it
you had to close the gate
and seal yourself in the pit
the only way you could decide your faith.
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zeberdee
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2010-08-16 13:53:09]
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Re: Detached
(User Rating: 1 )
by Perfectly_flawed on
Monday, 16th August 2010 @ 06:14:04 PM AEST
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| Very deep yet clear. Beautiful words whose meaning does not get lost in the diction. |
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