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Broken Promises
Contributed by
dancal04
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Tuesday, 17th August 2010 @ 05:51:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He'll cut you with a knife
then cry while you bleed.
He'll take away the pain,
then inflict it again.
Demonic actions
with the words of an angel,
"I'll make it up to you"
until the next time, stranger.
Broken promises,
weakness, a disease.
His non committal attitude,
still he begs me please.
Search for the hypocrite,
it'll take you years to find him.
I've seen it once,
I've seen it twice,
still I can't seem to fight him.
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Re: Broken Promises
(User Rating: 1 )
by dirk-velvet on
Thursday, 19th August 2010 @ 06:23:09 AM AEST
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your words are sharper,
cut deeper,
than
the knife.
"weakness, a disease"
( great line ! ... So True ...for both sides. )
Your wonderful words will coach
you through.
Peace&Love
Dirk Velvet |
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