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Metallic Leaves
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 07:51:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Not quite Summer or Fall,
unique leaves shine metallic and bright in the daylight.
Summer leaves are green with life;
fall leaves are colourful before free-falling from life.
Shiny silver leaves dance and sparkle in the breeze;
nature's tinsel shimmers like jewelry on a tree.
This metallic tree mesmerizes me;
Sterling silver leaves hypnotize as branches
wave back and forth on nature's command.
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lesoleilnoire
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2010-08-20 19:51:04]
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Re: Metallic Leaves
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by emystar on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 09:21:28 PM AEST
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Good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Metallic Leaves
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by northernlights on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 11:35:14 PM AEST
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| Its amazing to see the trees shimmering like this in bright metallic colours,'nature's tinsel' mesmerizing lovely descriptive write reminding me of another of Nature's beautiful images |
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Re: Metallic Leaves
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 21st August 2010 @ 05:40:44 AM AEST
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| Wonderful writing! I love nature in all her forms and seasons. You have captured the very essence of nature in these few well thought out words. well done. |
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Re: Metallic Leaves
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 04:16:46 PM AEST
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A mesmerizing poem. Full of such beautiful, well-described images. I especially liked this line:
'fall leaves are colourful before free-falling from life.'
Made me think of pictures I've seen of the fall in Vermont, something I've always wanted to see for myself.
-Phil |
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