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Haunted Place Part II
Contributed by
Sammys24
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Monday, 23rd August 2010 @ 08:26:57 PM in AEST
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Haunted Place Part II
Pictures they are broken
Frames, now shattered glass
Violent words, we have spoken
Memories, in the past
Scars left on my shoulder
Bruises on my face
Screams now just echoes
In this haunted place
Beaten and broken
Im trying to fight it all
You left me standing on shattered glass
Im trying on my own not to fall
The blood stained t-shirt
Mascara on my face
Shaking hands, a trembling body
A haunted, empty space
I couldnt fight you
I couldnt scream
And I couldnt run
And be unseen
Because wherever I went
There youd be
With a license to kill
Running after me
I lost you in the shadows
I lost you in the dark
Youre still running
While Im stuck here with every mark
That you left me on my shoulder
On my face, on my arm
But you are gone now
And can do me no more harm.
Only in my dreams
You can get me
Only in those screams
You can hear me.
Youve just left me haunted.
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Re: Haunted Place Part II
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 23rd August 2010 @ 11:52:41 PM AEST
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Hauntingly well done
I like the way it flows. |
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Re: Haunted Place Part II
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 06:04:29 AM AEST
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This had a great flow. I loved especially: "Shaking hands, a trembling body, a haunted, empty space." Very visual.
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