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Burnt Bridges
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Monday, 23rd August 2010 @ 11:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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So tell me why
I should even try
now that you need saving
when
I still remember the night
you said our love was a lie
and that you were always faking,
or how about those times
I felt like I would die
as my heart was breaking.
so tell me why
I should try
come on
tell me one more lie,
I can't do it anymore
it took me time
but
I got over you,
I have no reason to try
so go on and cry
cause you ain't worth saving.
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Re: Burnt Bridges
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by simonwrite on
Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 02:27:03 AM AEST
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| me amo |
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Re: Burnt Bridges
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 24th August 2010 @ 05:56:32 AM AEST
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I always get so excited when I see you've posted something. This was great. Full of emotion, and you expressed it well. I love how it started off, "So tell me why, I should even try, now that you need saving." I think we've all been in the kind of give and take relationship where "I give and you take." Look at me, I'm rambling as always. Great write.
-Kara |
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Re: Burnt Bridges
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 04:39:32 PM AEST
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| Great poem! This is the first poem of your's I've read but I am really impressed! I can't wait to read the other one's! |
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