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Ill Wait
Contributed by
punkrocknemo
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Thursday, 26th August 2010 @ 05:21:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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This delicate thing i have here in my chest,
Ill give it to someone when the time seems best.
Im aware of the risk of the chance ill fall,
But ill be willing to trust him through it all.
As i walk the halls and see each and every one,
I realize i want that experience it seems very fun.
Ive seen them through the up's and the down's,
Where theyre bright smile fades to a frown.
For we will sacrifice our heart,
Right from the very start.
Eventually find the one,
Our search we will have won.
But for now ill wait for the day,
When ill be able to say:
Ive found my one and only
no more time to feel lonely.
When it will be my turn,
I will no longer feel this burn.
By: Jessica Coy
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Re: Ill Wait
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by Fern on
Thursday, 26th August 2010 @ 05:31:48 PM AEST
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| Insightful and very interesting...you have great potential as a serious writer...a new voice to be heard...keep on writing! |
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Re: Ill Wait
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by JustinLW on
Thursday, 26th August 2010 @ 07:55:42 PM AEST
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| I agree, a lot of potential. you're very descriptive. |
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Re: Ill Wait
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by xbabycyutie on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 08:59:37 PM AEST
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this was such a great poem
every word made me smile because im guilty of feeling that way
i hope everything works out well for u(:
hope u found the one(:
keep writing!
-xbabycyutie(; |
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