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Shackles on a Ghost
Contributed by
Sasha
on
Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 10:11:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Tonight stands hollow and deathly pale
The absence of a full-moon heavy and insane
When it pulled away, deceiving, echoing
A labyrinth of insecurities whirling
Everything hides behind my ignorance
A hundred myriad shades of deterioration
Cut mazes across every shadowed thought
Burning me, I am tossed around bound
My fragility in steel bands, my existence hidden
I live ahead of my times, ways I am born to
Giving all I can, I smile at the takers
Closing my eyes for a brief eternity
I remember, some roles dont get to play receivers
Copyright ©
Sasha
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2010-08-27 10:11:24]
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Re: Shackles on a Ghost
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 12:26:51 AM AEST
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Surprisingly an intuitive passage
it was also plagued with darkness,
artistically sound
doused in wisdom
truly full of depth and character
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: Shackles on a Ghost
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 12th January 2011 @ 05:36:50 PM AEST
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oh I really like the way this flows
darkly and off balance....
well done. |
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