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The Crooked Picture
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 08:13:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The picture of the wall rests
skewed;
it views life from unique angles.
A picture perfectly straight sees the norm;
the crooked picture sees life's twists and turns.
The balanced picture remains safe and overlooked;
the tilted art dangles and attracts eyes from the start.
Allow the picture to remained crooked on the wall;
it's the most intriguing picture of them all.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-08-27 20:13:08]
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Re: The Crooked Picture
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 28th August 2010 @ 12:25:46 AM AEST
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| Great way of observing life using the metaphor of a crooked picture really enjoyed this |
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Re: The Crooked Picture
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 07:07:11 PM AEST
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I've always like things a bit wacky but also a bit controlled. Too out of wack causes too much confusion but too straight and "balanced" can be a bit boring. I like the "angle" you tok at writing this. Thank you.
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Re: The Crooked Picture
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 02:21:46 AM AEST
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| Another strong piece of writing beautifuly executed. Well done. |
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Re: The Crooked Picture
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by scottstone on
Saturday, 4th September 2010 @ 10:15:18 AM AEST
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| very nicely written |
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