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Military Time
Contributed by
debris
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Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 05:47:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She keeps military time
in a note book where she writes.
Every second,
Every first
Neatly scrawled across a lineless page.
Every coming, every going
interlaced with fantasy.
All the things she wanted
and the things she didnt want to be.
Changing, shifting moments
in her own reality.
Keeping military time;
documented, precisely.
I keep military time.
Document her every move.
Delusions and confusions.
Precise reports on
precisely lined pages.
We keep military time
in parallel unison,
to each action, a reaction.
Our physics so precise
Every moment, every minute,
every second, every first.
In the notebook of her life;
two copies, incomplete.
Copyright ©
debris
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2010-08-29 05:47:06]
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Re: Military Time
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 06:57:45 PM AEST
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A unique (and efficient  ) perspective on you two. Me likes. |
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Re: Military Time
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 30th August 2010 @ 02:09:40 AM AEST
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| A very intimate insite in to the lives of the two of you. Very well composed and expressed. thanks for sharing. |
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