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Contributed by
apartment213
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Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i found comfort i found misunderstanding
i was found face up explaining my course of action
dont cough up any words its a healthy silence
im not the stone to lean on im not ur course of action
i can barely keep myself from collapsing
id go outta my way to prove i still....
i love all u took from me u made me feel u made me feel u made me feel
i found a friend i found an unhelping hand
i found today as tragic as my last
cant keep up on this cant hold my breath another minute
i want to hold u up i cant start let alone finish
today is the finest day i might even eat
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2003-04-19 04:35:00]
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 03:38:57 PM AEST
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kenny...this is beautiful..."you made me feel" thats so perfect its scary...you're amazing, i've told you this before...i look forward to talking to you and reading your poetry everyday....keep it up, its great
Lindsey |
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by wazarov on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 11:15:13 PM AEST
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| "dont cough up any words its a healthy silence " wow i really loved that poem especially this line,wonderful kenny. keep up bro |
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 12:59:21 AM AEST
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| Dear Kenny, I have seen your comment on my poem.. good, in this poem I see your good expression of love and emotion... this is beautiful.. venkat |
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by Bizzy on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 06:58:07 AM AEST
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| Hi, 213! You had some wonderful lines in this poem and a nice flow. Friend Bizzy |
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