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Drowning
Contributed by
RealmX
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Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Into life I dive
Through the depths of confusion
Weaved by people I do not understand
Using technology that only kills us
From nature we are seperated
At birth we are thrown in
The world that is chaos
Refuses to let me go
Driven by the power unseen
I stumble through the darkness
Which engulfs and sonsumes my soul
Being pulled to the void
I rise up against the idea
That society is the only way
To get through this life
Which won't let me emerge unscathed!
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2003-04-19 07:05:00]
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Re: Drowning
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:32:38 PM AEST
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This was a very enjoyable poem great work.
The Phantom |
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Re: Drowning
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by Tanna on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 11:12:35 PM AEST
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| WOW! I'm really enjoying your writing style, keep it up! |
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Re: Drowning
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:12:06 PM AEST
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| ah, very true... and, yes, society is here to stay... but, i have found other ways to embrace nature... thank you for this poem... blessings... |
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Re: Drowning
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th January 2006 @ 03:00:05 PM AEST
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| very true. great poem i had a great time reading it. |
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