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When You Go
Contributed by
outsider
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Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My fingertips still retain the last touch of you
My eyes keep the imprint of your last look.
My arms feel the emptiness of where you just were
My heart beats more insistent than a sharply closed book.
All of my senses remain stirred by you, alive
The scent of you lingers and I breathe it in deep.
My mind commits to memory as much of you as possible
When you go I hunger and inside I weep.
My lips mirror yours as you mouth "I love you"
And how much I love you I wish you could know
How every fibre within me screams out "please stay"
But I stand still and all I can do is watch you go
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2003-04-19 07:35:00]
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Re: When You Go
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by Lovingangel4u on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 08:00:53 AM AEST
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| Darling other wonderfully written poem. ILUVM |
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Re: When You Go
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 08:53:02 AM AEST
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| beautifully written poem, i much enjoyed it:) hugs n' love to you and yours, always nessa |
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Re: When You Go
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 01:40:21 PM AEST
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Very nice. I love it
michelle |
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