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mouth full
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 11:03:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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cornicopia brain
words thudding
out
like stones
in my echo-chamber
skull
scents changing
with twilight
dark
now secret
surface world
fading
September light
eyes far away.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-09-08 11:03:36]
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Re: mouth full
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 04:08:26 PM AEST
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Ooooh mysterious....*Cue intrigue-signalling music*
I liked the middle stanza the best I think, had a nice sound to it.
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Re: mouth full
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by Leoricx on
Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 03:39:57 PM AEST
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Very nice.
Words are funny like that. I find, when I don't want them they bombard my brain, fill it up and drown out pretty much everything else...then the minute I need them - poof - they're gone.
Nice write though.
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