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After all...
Contributed by
pinkunicornoctober
on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 12:35:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I often think back to those days,
when we were carefree kids with nothing better to do,
then run a little wild,
live in denial,
about the fact that there was something between me and you,
you always told me,
but i ignored you,
i even slapped you a time or two,
but you just laughed,
you were like that,
nothing ever got to you.
and now the hardest part of all,
is stopping the tears demanding to fall,
and all the things i once said,
like you give me butterflies,
and i'm glad i'm stuck in your head,
and i've missed you too,
yes, it's true,
i've fallen for you.
goodbye was so simple before,
like when i told you to leave,
don't bother me,
"hey, there's the door,"
but now it's sadder,
and if only i'd said it once more......
i wish you would call me,
at least one last time,
even if it's just to let me know,
someday you'd be on my mind,
i wouldn't even hang up the phone this time.....
i'd rush to your house,
even in my pajamas,
because i miss your lips on my mouth,
and i'd tell you,
i'll never forget you,
turns out you were right,
i did fall,
you were what made me complete,
after all........
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Re: After all...
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by chrisdavid on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 12:43:36 PM AEST
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This is very sad. I suppose the lesson to be learned is say how you feel there and then because no-one knows what's around the corner.
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Re: After all...
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by iiloveyouxx19 on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 06:05:17 PM AEST
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Such strong emotions! i'm sorry you have to put up with such emotion, such sadness. It's not the easiest thing to do, but expressing it in words may help relieve the pain. Best of luck to you in the future, and i am tremendously sorry for your loss.
~Chrissy |
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Re: After all...
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by ming on
Wednesday, 8th September 2010 @ 08:37:40 PM AEST
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Lots of emotion might be a little wordy. But still nice job.
ming |
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