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Forever
Contributed by
Anulik
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Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 01:35:25 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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No matter all the circumstances
My love for you will last forever,
No matter if life's poor or fancy,
We'll spend the rest of it together.
No matter who, no matter what
I'll keep believing in our love,
And I'll keep praying just for you
to ask HIS guidance from above.
No matter what the people say,
No matter even if they're right,
My heart with you will always stay
Just like right now, just like tonight.
And no matter all the problems
That can come across our way
My faith in you always remains
Just like right now,just like today.
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Re: Forever
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 04:17:11 PM AEST
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To say English isn't your native language, this is a good effort.
-Phil |
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Re: Forever
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Thursday, 9th September 2010 @ 05:49:17 PM AEST
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| You are better than a lot of people whose native language it is.....and you can spell....what a bonus LOL. Your poem is pretty good, especially if it truly is your first one, plus people generally get stronger and better as time goes on. Years from now you will look back on your first poems and realize just how much your writing has matured compared with your earlier works. Your best friends should be a Thesaurus and a rhyming dictionary - they can help heaps. Cheers. |
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Re: Forever
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by iiloveyouxx19 on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 09:12:41 PM AEST
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| I really like this, and english is my native language lol. keep writing! |
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Re: Forever
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by natizzle on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 04:20:41 AM AEST
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| love it!! :) |
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