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Inside I'm Dead
Contributed by
neverlosehope
on
Friday, 10th September 2010 @ 01:18:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Don't ask me whats wrong,
You won't understand,
Last night i was crying,
With a knife in my hand,
"I want to help",
You keep saying to me,
But how can you help,
When you don't feel me bleed,
I smile at you,
Can you tell that it's fake?
I bet you don't know,
My life is at stake,
I hate being alive,
I didn't tell you, i know,
I scream on the inside,
I won't let it show,
I've been pushed to the limit,
I've been pushed to far,
I just can't explain,
What these feelings are,
After all these years,
I've kept up the fight,
I just kept on fighting,
And i held on tight,
Well I've come to the end,
My strength has all frayed,
The path I was following,
I seem to have strayed,
"You'll be OK",
That's what you said,
But outside im nothing,
Inside i'm dead.
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neverlosehope
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2010-09-10 01:18:55]
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Re: Inside I'm Dead
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by jordanarce17 on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 10:35:01 AM AEST
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| good job. i sorry for your pain but thank you for writing this because i feel the same way. |
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Re: Inside I'm Dead
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by williamdye on
Sunday, 17th October 2010 @ 12:11:29 PM AEST
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| This is beautifully written. |
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