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Statues of our Heroes
Contributed by
Obnoxious_Bread
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Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 05:10:46 PM in AEST
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A the lone statue of a man sits in the wind and a lone boy sits at its feet he wonders why the man was born a hero and he, just a lone boy sitting at his feet
He walks home noticed only by the passing wind he thinks of the statue and fame of lives beyond his living of sacrifices beyond his will
The boy grows up and looks like man but ist still just a lone boy, sitting at the feet of a statue he no longer wonders how or why tomorrow, but just what today.
Yet today was to set the shape of his tomorrow and the wind passing by his startled face becomes a hurricane of words, and suddenly he knows he was born no hero, but perhaps becoming one was all the same
and of course, the lone boy, sitting at the feet of the statues wishing he had statues of his own, accepts to give up his years, his loves, his life, for some godforsaken highway to fame and a life of null and void
And as he pushes humanity's limits he becomes a man, who's future is not years but darkness, and death comes soon enough embraced by the man-hero
His people whimper in the dark true, if temporary, but perhaps true remorse waterfalls of tears, massive sadness for not being able to see in the lone boy at the feet on the statue the man-hero who gave traded his life for theirs
But the tears dry up, like the cement of his statues, statues not to the sitting lone boy, but to the man-hero they saw, and he wanted, proudly standing as the wind passes through his battle scarred fingers...
And a lone boy sits at the feet of the sitting statue, in the passing wind, wondering why he was never a lone boy, but born a man-hero...
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Re: Statues of our Heroes
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 05:18:50 PM AEST (User
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Very interesting. It gives me a sense of someone not feeling like he or she has done enough with life. I felt the loneliness of the boy a great deal. I may be off in my interpretation, but I definitely enjoyed.
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