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I let this happen?
Contributed by
Daniellemarie
on
Monday, 13th September 2010 @ 11:20:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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where was I when I let my world turn so dark?
was I sitting down filling my lungs with smoke?
Could I have been the one that lead the way?
what was I thinking when I let you spin a web
around me,weaveing, and webbing untill I
can no longer breathe. I go through my grey
days as if someone else is pulling my strings,
up and down to make me walk. I draw pictures
of girls crying with big dark eyes, and still I can
never escape the trap I set myself in. I can't feel
anymore, I can't feel life anymore.
Copyright ©
Daniellemarie
... [
2010-09-13 23:20:13]
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Re: I let this happen?
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 05:41:35 AM AEST
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| This poem is so sad! It's really good though! I love when people can put their pain into words...it really helps! Great Job! |
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Re: I let this happen?
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 02:03:22 PM AEST
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| This is indeed very sad but you deal with the sadness in such a way that this becomes highly readable. Nice work. |
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Re: I let this happen?
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by UNORTHODOX on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 09:57:51 AM AEST
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The beautiful thing about sorrow
it to does pass
to find strength to overcome sadness is wonderful
I firmly believe that you'll shed this layer and many more
at which time I wish you nothing but happiness
I enjoyed this passage because it's truely authentic
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