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A Winter Kiss
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 12:01:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Hot breath fogs the air;
two cloudy breaths combining,
lips making contact
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-09-14 00:01:22]
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Re: A Winter Kiss
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 12:59:37 AM AEST
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Short and sweet. Good stuff.
Chris. |
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Re: A Winter Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 01:20:27 AM AEST
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| Love it!!!! |
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Re: A Winter Kiss
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by natizzle on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 04:17:33 AM AEST
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| amazing haiku :) |
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Re: A Winter Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 08:02:22 AM AEST
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Nice!
-Phil |
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Re: A Winter Kiss
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 01:47:51 AM AEST
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| Fantastic! I love your work and once again you don't disapoint. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: A Winter Kiss
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by ming on
Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 11:06:58 AM AEST
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Great read! You NEVER disappoint...
ming |
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Re: A Winter Kiss
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by windowguy on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 09:39:08 AM AEST
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| Easily visualised. The mark of a great poem. |
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Re: A Winter Kiss
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 08:49:32 AM AEST
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A winter kiss would be nice right around this time of the holidays haha just kiddin. nice write
take care
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