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You Once Stood Here
Contributed by
pinkunicornoctober
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Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 06:36:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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you once stood here,
so close that i could feel you breathing,
i demanded that you go home,
but of course you refused,
saying you were never leaving me,
because you could see how bad i needed you.
i was independent and loved being free,
so i didn't want you to know,
i felt about you the way you felt for me....
we were both just so young,
and it didn't seem like enough,
to fall in-love,
because we did that once,
and i suddenly gave you up,
because as teenagers ,
the whole world was against us.......
you once stood here,
and i said i didn't need you,
i couldn't even look you in the eye,
instead i cussed you out before saying my "goodbyes",
then slamming the door,
knowing good and well,
if you had seen my face you could tell...
you once stood here,
and i slapped the fire out of you,
i told you to go to hell,
and "it's over, we're through,"
"this time I mean it so don't come back,"
never knowing this would be our last chance to laugh....
now if you're standing here,
it's b/c you're a ghost,
you died shortly after,
i made you go home,
and i still regret it to this day,
b/c it might not have happened,
if i had let you stay.....
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2010-09-14 06:36:00]
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Re: You Once Stood Here
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by Thatweegirl on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 03:35:24 PM AEST
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| Some really poignant bits in this... |
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Re: You Once Stood Here
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 05:18:57 PM AEST
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wow, this is very sad.
Sorry for every one's loss.
Welcome to YPDC.
I'm sure this was very hard to write.
You told your story well.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: You Once Stood Here
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 01:45:38 AM AEST
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| This is a very sad story but you tell it with great sensitivity. This is very well writen and your words do your story justice. Well done. |
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