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dangerous new world
Contributed by
ming
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Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 11:21:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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banging as if a moth
against a screen
the wind moans
illusions of continuance
girdling Earth
the wind moans
long breaths
trailing away nothing
the wind moans
rising up again
tears whisper
and moan.
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ming
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2010-09-15 11:21:14]
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Re: dangerous new world
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by pooper on
Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 11:52:27 AM AEST
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Made me question. Made me think.
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Re: dangerous new world
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 09:44:29 AM AEST
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Sounds like the apocalypse. You stirred up some pretty good visuals with few words. I love the ending:
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