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Left Behind
Contributed by
Vamp3ric
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Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 06:32:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Left behind in the past
With memories that will always last
I am broken
Trapped in my own place
You moved undoubted
I was left behind
Broken hearted
Something that might not heal
I will always show my mask
Pain, Sorrow, Anger if you ask
With blood stained tears
Ill pretend everything is okay
The light in the tunnel has died
I was left behind
Your voice and soft skin
You were everything I dreamt of and more
I live my life in pain
Only memories will remain
I will smile and wave
But once youre gone Ill say everything is wrong
Love is blind
I was left behind
The dark tunnel grows larger
It consumes me in pain
I have no regret
Of the day we met
I hide under my skin
Carved your name into my bones
Now I know my life
Will never be the same
I put my mask on
It will make me forget
I was left behind
Now I am left behind
This will never change
This is my last good-bye
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Vamp3ric
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2010-09-16 06:32:48]
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Re: Left Behind
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by NewGuy on
Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 09:58:28 AM AEST
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| wow, what a powerful write. I hope taht your heart heals quickly. I understand what it means to love and lose. Time does heal all wounds. Keep on writing and maybe one day not too far away we will be reading "A beautiful Day" about your newly found special someone. NIce work and good luck :) |
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Re: Left Behind
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by JackDylan on
Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 11:22:15 AM AEST
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| good poem :) |
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Re: Left Behind
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by Vamp3ric on
Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 10:27:28 PM AEST
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| Thanks guys Im not really a poet I just like to write when all emotions I have needs to come out thats when I write mostly but thanks a million |
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Re: Left Behind
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by holy on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 02:07:45 AM AEST
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Hi, nice to meet you. Thank you for your encouragement.
Great job with power words in this sad and beautiful poem. I find you a strong and understanding friend in the big big world. I love your courage. |
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