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Stormy Sky.
Contributed by
cashfan1
on
Friday, 17th September 2010 @ 01:38:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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All day the sky has stumbled over the valley
And crashed through the mountains,
Splintering the horizon with dark clouds
And causing the trees to shed light years
And leaves.
The rocky escarpment of a far hill has smoldered,
A deep resentment festering,
And below the valley has whimpered
Under the treacherous torment of the stormy sky.
But now the early evening is a sun widened lens
Of a lazy eye opening
To let in shadows that crisscross the landscape
Into the night,
The fields are running emerald under a sheen of gossamer
And the hedgerows throb with small birds.
All around the evening is ripening with darkness.
Deep, soft, gentle darkness.
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cashfan1
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2010-09-17 13:38:29]
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Re: Stormy Sky.
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 10:51:48 AM AEST
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You really have a strong knack for creating rich visuals for the reader. I love stormy days such as you've described so eloquently.
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