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Loneliness
Contributed by
maverick3378
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Saturday, 18th September 2010 @ 08:57:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The shimmering of the diminishing sunlight,
Serving a perfect backdrop to the light drizzle,
A picture perfect for the budding painters.
The music from the ruffling of the leaves,
Entwining with the chirping of the birds,
Like the music from a playing harp.
How blessed creatures are we,
To have witnessed the Heaven being mortal souls,
Can we ask for anything more.
Yet, there is something missing,
I don't know it though.
The happiness is confined to me,
No one to share the joy with,
I am all alone.
I am overwhelmed with the majestic sight,
But am deeply saddened by the condition of my plight.
I don't wanna be here anymore,
I miss everyone whom I have never met,
I just wanna be not alone.
Loneliness is a curse,
Not overshadowed by the Heavenly views,
Killing you each and every moment.
I have endured it for I dont know how many years,
But I wanna "live" from here on.
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Re: Loneliness
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by funmi on
Saturday, 18th September 2010 @ 12:16:11 PM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem |
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Re: Loneliness
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Saturday, 18th September 2010 @ 05:10:47 PM AEST
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| Nicely written....even though i usually don't like prose. Nice work. |
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Re: Loneliness
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by theunknown on
Saturday, 18th September 2010 @ 05:18:09 PM AEST
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| so so true and the way u put it in words is beautiful |
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Re: Loneliness
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by suzyo on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 07:34:17 PM AEST
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| great poem. The words were lovely. |
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Re: Loneliness
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by irisblue on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 07:45:09 AM AEST
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| This has a hypnotic beauty to it . I can relate. |
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