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Self Demise
Contributed by
flirtyrockstar
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Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
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The air is chilled with remembrance
Fond days left in an acid rain
Here I'm lost in a conundrum storm
imbibing tears to feed my pain
The windows broadcast only dolourousy
In varying achromatic shades
The tradgedy, and only life I know
Pleasantries can only fade
Since the day the lights went out
My feelings only macerate
I trespassed into the nirvana
Now agony is my only fate
Destiny has conveyed it's storms
Upon my sorrow hanging head
Here in this life without your love
I bid myself, I were dead
Copyright ©
flirtyrockstar
... [
2003-04-19 16:35:00]
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Re: Self Demise
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by BlackFire9786 on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 04:49:25 PM AEST
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I love the description in this poem, and the way it flowed, it was beautiful!
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Re: Self Demise
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 05:37:18 PM AEST
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I liked this Liz cept I couldn't understand some of the words. it was nice to see a poem from you after so long. keep it up!
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: Self Demise
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 01:22:24 AM AEST
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So cold with much pain and loss, I liked the way it flowed as one and came together with a good conclusion.
A very good write, look forward to seeing more. |
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Re: Self Demise
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 03:05:36 PM AEST
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| i loved this poem, it is so well written, your talent just shines through in it. |
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