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Better Off Alone
Contributed by
Bexstasy
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Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 10:30:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I don't want to see your face,
Because I don't want to feel what I'm feeling,
You just walked into my life,
As I'd barely started healing,
And yet here you are before me,
I don't need to waste time on 'love',
It'll end the way it always did,
And I've simpley had enough,
I don't want to face that pain again,
Nor be the one that hurts you,
They always say it could be different,
But that never has been true,
I'd only push you away,
If you wanted to be let in,
I'd love to have you there,
But we'd still never win,
I'm just always so numb now,
So cold... Like a stone,
I've finally come to realise that,
I'm better off alone.
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Bexstasy
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2010-09-20 10:30:40]
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Re: Better Off Alone
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 12:46:56 PM AEST
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Better off alone, no, surely not!! You sound as if you've had some bad experiences with love and are at the stage where you don't need the hassle that comes with it. Excellent write. Love it!
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Better Off Alone
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by suzyo on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 04:20:40 PM AEST
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| What a sad poem. |
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Re: Better Off Alone
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 09:25:03 PM AEST
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so cold...like a stone
EXCELLENT |
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Re: Better Off Alone
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by Anu on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 02:54:52 PM AEST
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Loved the Poem...
Smooth flow..!!
Cheerz
Anu :) |
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Re: Better Off Alone
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by Holly573 on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 06:47:55 PM AEST
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| you have done a really good job of putting your feelings into words |
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Re: Better Off Alone
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by jamesatteb on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 09:22:35 AM AEST
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such strong imagery in this writing,and i know how you feel too this has happened to me constantly and youre always afraid.
love it and thanks for sharing!! |
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Re: Better Off Alone
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 01:36:42 PM AEST
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you put alot of feeling into this and it spills over the brim. you penned it well and I really like it!
- If you wanted to be let in,
I'd love to have you there, -
great lines! |
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