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Freedom
Contributed by
Kane
on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Words can't explain my pain, I have no one to blame,
This is my fate, I can't accept a happy state,
Everything is so Damn hard for me, tell me what you think I should be,
Go ahead and active my hate,
I can't control my wrath, follow the bloody path,
I've surcome to the beast that's inside me,
The torment is intense, taking my life is my intent,
Walking through hell with gasoline underwear, do you think I care,
Consumed by hate, it's the choas I cheate,
I wait for satan and his horseman, accepting a life of sin,
Take the knife to my wrist, no longer able to resist,
End my misrey, provoke the minstry,
Sceams of pain and fear, ehco in my ear,
Lost in this world, I can't find myself,
Cutting, lying, and trying, but still not dieing,
Doubt, go ahead and shout, let the anger out,
Accept, respect, death and it's beauty,
Allow and bow to satan and his fury,
Trapped in a cell, this is hell, my soul for sale,
Forsaken, soul taken, The beast is fed,
I lay silent in a tub of red.
Heart & Soul
Kane
Copyright ©
Kane
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2003-04-19 17:05:00]
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Re: Freedom
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by BlackFire9786 on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 06:50:29 PM AEST
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I love this poem, maybe because i can relate to it, you just wanna give up everything and accept the inevitable, but believe me, don't give up, there's only one way from the bottom, and that's up! Great write!
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Re: Freedom
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by karoody on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 02:40:52 AM AEST
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this is a great write, you tell of your emotions very well, with a great use of imagery, just please never give up...i know things can get hard, but i hope you would never let your misery win and take over like that...take care
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Re: Freedom
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by Kane on
Monday, 2nd June 2003 @ 02:52:19 AM AEST
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Thank you for your comments. It truly made my night.
Kane |
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