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My Heart.
Contributed by
katy92
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Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 08:35:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The air is becoming too thick for me to breathe. I feel my heart BOOM BOOM no echo just a beat. I try to stay awake but it's getting too hot I can't stay in the heat much longer.
I cry I scream no one hears me. I feel faint I wake up on a stiff bed. I look around me and see nothing but machines.
The doctors poking me with all these instruments. I try to talk. Really I'm asleep.
I wake up for real this time look down and see the mark of them. A huge scar encompasses my chest. I'm alive =)
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Re: My Heart.
(User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 01:20:19 PM AEST
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Nice poem. Explaining how you felt well.
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