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let us fall in love with the opening flowers
Contributed by
holy
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 12:04:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Let us fall in love with the opening flowers
What a blue sky
bring me a wonderful wish
wish love with me
like the lovers on the street
My heartbeat
your eyes
they are all playing hide and seek
What a long vacation
let us go for it
let us fall in love with the opening flowers
let us run with the blowing winds
It is time for us both to play with the sea hand in hand
come on
dear
summer is waiting for us
let us fall in love with the opening flowers
let us cuddle together before the green light
let me travel around the world with you
Yes
join in laughter
let us fly together
Looking at the crowd on the square of my dream
the sun down and the moon up
our love is getting strong and strong with the rain
unexpectedly
how warm and wide your shoulder are
do you desire the sunshine just like me
Tell me the truth
my honey
hesitated just can lose our love
Do you understand
love is really busy everyday
Fall in love with me
my darling
let run follow the blowing winds
It is in time to walk with the sea shoulder to shoulder
Let us catch the summer
fall in love with the opening flowers
hug me dear before the green light
join me
let us fly day and night
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holy
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2010-09-21 00:04:08]
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Re: let us fall in love with the opening flowers
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 01:16:05 AM AEST
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Wayyyyyyy too flowery for me to comment on with any sort of expertise, but i suspect it is good. I will leave others more knowing than i to let you know and give you their opinions.
Btw.....unexpectly = "unexpectedly" |
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Re: let us fall in love with the opening flowers
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by irisblue on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 07:37:39 AM AEST
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| This is just lovely, I really enjoyed reading it |
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Re: let us fall in love with the opening flowers
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by ming on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 09:11:20 AM AEST
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I like this line;
My heartbeat
your eyes
they are all playing hide and seek
ming |
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