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Little Girl
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
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Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 09:09:05 AM in AEST
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Let me be a kid again. Where ignorance was bliss.
Give me just one moment. Just one moment to relive.
Give me back the days of fun, without a single care.
Give me back the days in which, I never did once fear.
Give me back those happy days, when life was full of fun.
Give me back the friends I had, and give me back the sun.
Give me back the carelessness of climbing tall, tall trees.
Give me back the little girl who still believed in dreams.
Give me back the times in which Id sneak for midnight snacks.
Give me back the little girl who thought these times would last.
Give me back the hide and seek, the dancing in the rain.
Give me back the little girl whos laugh was never faked.
Give me back the little girl who cared not what she wore.
Give me back the little girl who did not judge the world.
Give me back the little girl who use to wish on stars.
Give me back the little girl who had no broken heart.
Give me back the little girl, if only for a day.
Let me be that girl again. I beg.. I plead I pray
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Re: Little Girl
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 05:17:31 PM AEST
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| very good job! The only thing i'd recommend is have a few more words that rhyme with each other but this made me smile. I often think if I could be little again I would be happy. But in the past I always thought if I was an adult I'd be happy. lol. Good write. |
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Re: Little Girl
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 05:59:51 PM AEST
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Damn it. This was one of those poems that you wish yourself had thought of, but didn't....and not having thought of it, it went wasted.
Only 2 times you you made it rhyme were "fun/sun" and "day/pray".
I would love to plagerize the idea of it just so i could write my own version of it.....grrrrrr.
"Let me be a kid again, where ignorance was bliss,
Let me be young enough to savor my first kiss.
Give me back the days of fun without a single care,
Give me back those happy times when friends were always there.
Let me be that girl again - if only for a day,
Please let me be that kid again.....to you my God, i pray."
Damn it...get back and rewrite it!! |
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Re: Little Girl
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by suzyo on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 06:27:16 PM AEST
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| I love this poem...as a woman now...I too wish for those days again...when life was simple. |
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Re: Little Girl
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by shelby on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 07:38:21 PM AEST
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I am glad you came back to post this is beautiful. I at times wish for those days as well. Though alot of ly little girl days were not filled with good things either..... Sighhhhh but we can take the few good time right?
Loved this verse
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Little Girl
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 10:55:52 PM AEST
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| we all still have the little girl in us longing for carefree days thats why I hope we all get old disgracefully and in our own way still capture a few of those moments,great expressive write, a voice that alot of women I'm sure can identify with and be challenged with its yearning and memories |
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Re: Little Girl
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by chrisdavid on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 01:51:21 AM AEST
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I think this is quite brilliant!! Loved it. When we're young, we seem to enjoy every day and not care about anything, but as the years roll on, we probably read a little to much into everything. A five star write. Good to have you back.
Take care, Chris. |
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