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foolish heart
Contributed by
xbabycyutie
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Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 07:40:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I don't want to feel this way How can I win when it's a losing game The thought of you wanting me melts my heart But the fact that your with her breaks it apart Don't think I'll be here forever I refuse to wait around You may have girls lined up But don't count me as one The minutes we spend together feels like heaven But when those moments are over, the thought comes back of you being taken My mind says to leave My heart says to stay But you got to understand I'm not participating in the foolish games you play So let me stand aside and let you have your way This feeling probably won't last for long I know in my heart, it's with her where you belong
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Re: foolish heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by evah2121 on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 10:32:55 PM AEST (User
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This poem was beautiful. It had alot of emotions and I felt the passion In your writing. I've been In this position before, and In the end I realized that It wasn't worth It cause I was the last person "in line". But I you really think they are worth It, then go for It. I hope the best for you (: Very great writing. |
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Re: foolish heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by jennguy41 on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 05:01:35 PM AEST (User
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I am going thru that now but I say he doesn't belong with her he belongs with me and that's how in the end it will be, least i'm praying. |
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