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Kill her slowly...
Contributed by
pinkunicornoctober
on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 03:59:53 PM in AEST
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go ahead and laugh,
rub her beauty in my face,
grab her hand and hold her close,
let me know i have been replaced.
go ahead and tell her,
the sweet things you told me,
then unravel and reveal,
all the cruelty beneath.
go ahead and fool her,
tell her you're only shy,
hold her close then push her away,
let her feel she has been denied.
go ahead and tell her,
she's the one you need,
compliment her on her hair and smile,
then lie to her like you did me.
look her in the eye,
blush and then shyly smile,
tell your self you don't need her and move on,
fall deeper in denile.
go ahead and look at her,
with disgust written on your face,
you're not man enough to let her go,
keep her as a trophy from your game.
go ahead and find another girl,
make her think she is all you will ever need,
use her then push her aside,
kill her slowly the way you did me...
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Re: Kill her slowly...
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by suzyo on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 07:27:11 PM AEST
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| I absolutely love this poem...It was so heartfelt...I've been there too. |
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Re: Kill her slowly...
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 09:19:36 PM AEST
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I feel the emotion in this flow
well done |
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Re: Kill her slowly...
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by NewShakespeare on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:11:49 AM AEST
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| Powerful |
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Re: Kill her slowly...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:10:12 AM AEST
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| very powerful use of words... i like it... |
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Re: Kill her slowly...
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by kleetas on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 05:26:54 AM AEST
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| unicorns have excellent perception and your stinging poem shows your firey side.kewl write! |
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Re: Kill her slowly...
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by samueloliverrr on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 07:09:17 AM AEST
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| i LOVE this poem, i can relate so much to this, only if it was in a guys perspective... but great job. |
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Re: Kill her slowly...
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by Walkingdead on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 08:59:52 PM AEST
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| Very deep. Hits so close to home. |
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Re: Kill her slowly...
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 19th October 2010 @ 03:26:32 AM AEST
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| I feel yah. The longer the relationship the more you feel this way at the end. I can honestly say I know that my ex was head over heals for 2 years though. But i guess it wasn't meant to be. |
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Re: Kill her slowly...
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by eastboyez on
Sunday, 24th October 2010 @ 09:14:26 PM AEST
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| love it ! |
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