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The Bottle
Contributed by
Searcher
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Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The bottle is empty
Thought it would last
Memories fading
Not remembering the past
What of the future
If I only knew
Things I would change
That I would do
But I dont know the future
Trying to forget the past
What of this confusion
How long will it last
Ill just find another bottle
Thats what Ill do
And drink till its done
Bid all troubles adieu
Yes! Ill drink till its empty
Then thoughts, Ill have none
My head Ill lie down
Feeling the battles Ive won
And when I wake in the morning
Not feeling so great
Again theyll be argument
With my loving mate
Not listening to reason
What a headache Ive found
Thinking for hell I have headed
Surely! Im not heaven bound
( By Merv.V)
(April 12th, 2003)
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Re: The Bottle
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:28:58 PM AEST
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| this is great, you have really captured the feelings and emotions:) hugs nessa |
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Re: The Bottle
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 07:25:26 PM AEST
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Another good write.. I am enjoying your work so far..keep them coming...
Jenni |
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Re: The Bottle
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 01:47:17 PM AEST
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| You have such a way with words and emotions |
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