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No Answers
Contributed by
Spike
on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 05:09:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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all the pleasures never tasted
the proffered chances wasted
too many lips never kissed
opportunities dismissed
all the places never seen
realities that could have been
too late now, the past is set
buried deep in weak regret
so many hours I have slept
the rivers of tears Ive wept!
so many experiences and feelings
memories, thoughts and dealings
so much consumed
so much created
the meaning endlessly debated
the ticking clock, the rise and fall
of days and men and deeds and All
loved and lost, laughter ringing
laments and shouts and people singing
to culminate in lifes release
the Void - Beyond - at last, some peace.
Copyright ©
Spike
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2010-09-25 17:09:02]
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Re: No Answers
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by kleetas on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 07:25:23 AM AEST
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| who reads your writings...votes #5...which is the highest vote...somebody thinks its great writing,but they don't leave a comment?..you are busted!you and all your kind...you should become a premium member,delete all your posts and slink back under the rock where all you cheatin' faking' wannabees belong..you will never get any answers..cuz the truth will make you...unless ,perhaps there is actually a human error involved here...or maybe substandard program writing..i think this topic should be discussed in an open ypdc forum..whadja think, Spike?balls in your court. |
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Re: No Answers
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by spud on
Tuesday, 5th October 2010 @ 01:18:41 PM AEST
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Hi Spike,
Just read your poem ... twice, actually. I'm giving
it a 5, and now here's my comments.
This is a superb piece of verse. There are those
who write autobiographical scrolls yet in summary
their meaning is exactly as you have so succinctly
and briefly scribed here. I like your style, I like
your poetry, happy scribbling!
And so now, I'll just slink back to my 'Premium'
status.
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Re: No Answers
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by 2bpositive on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 08:41:09 PM AEST
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A nice poem.
It flows and sows
and does relate
what feelings of your heart
could never imitate.
As I read your poem twice and thrice
it was as clear as day
that for a piece entitled, "No Answers"
you surely had a lot to say
A good write
well done! |
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