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Enjoying The Ride
Contributed by
TheWildBeliever
on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 08:26:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You wouldn't know what's looking at you
'Till its gone, transparent, nothing more than see-through
But that's when you finally wonder if you should've stared
When his spirit of God gave you that stone cold glare
You're just a pawn in the game, taking life for a spin
And never once taking all of it in
Because to you this is all just a game
And to you, when you tore out my heart,
It was all just the same
Where were you when all that ***** went down?
Oh, that's right, you got problems of your own, all around.
Because obviously, its you that you love.
Its you that you praise, like that spaghetti monster above
Yet all this time I held out my hand
And promised you a smile as long as you'd understand
But I can't give you it all, because life isn't so plain
But you never cared, because to you
It was all just the same
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Re: Enjoying The Ride
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by tinybitinsane on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 01:40:45 AM AEST
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beautiful post!
it shows a lot of emotion, i love it.
keep it up :) |
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