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The Boy Next Door
Contributed by
applethoughtrotten
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Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 12:09:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Too large for most to accomodate,
If it is important he'll be late.
Sometimes vulgar and crude to the core.
Never mistaken as the boy next door.
A hard headed Giant that's misunderstood.
Entirely too intellegent for his own good.
Cares for nobody but himself
and anyone one else in need of help.
A bit chauvanistic, a womans man
bedding as many as anyone can.
Intimidates others just for fun.
An Aborition to most, enigma to some.
He takes a few drugs. Make that many.
Rarely his pockets carry more than a penny
He eats too much and never enough.
Gives as good as he gets, It's only stuff!
He is never wrong, less often right.
His sense of humor is quite the riot.
I have never known a man such as he.
Always there when I've been in need.
Talk all you want and think as you may
Sure he has a few faults, but he is really ok
A brash gentle giant who will often offend.
My brother, my buddy, my friend to the end.
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Re: The Boy Next Door
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 12:20:28 AM AEST
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| From whence cometh my help? so often from directions we would never dream of or predict, this made me smile because true friends in this life often have halos that have slipped almost entirely and they are not recognised by society but they are the diamonds who will be there and help you and stand by you without fail, love this straight from the heart. |
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Re: The Boy Next Door
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by DayLilly on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 06:01:38 PM AEST
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| I LOVE IT! i wish i had that big vocabulary of yours:/ |
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Re: The Boy Next Door
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by williamdye on
Monday, 18th October 2010 @ 06:40:30 AM AEST
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| I really liked this |
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Re: The Boy Next Door
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by 2bpositive on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 02:05:56 AM AEST
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Your poem is fraught
with that contant thought
whether we think we know
what friendship can flow
from those special people
that don't seem to grow
But you say what it is, at the end of the day
A friend that is there when you're in need
Is a true friend in deed
very nicely done.
keep writing, looking forward to reading more.
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