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Victim of Your Own Hands
Contributed by
TheWildBeliever
on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:04:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I can see what you see not,
Your eyes have weakened, my vision has grown
You feel cold, but I feel warmth
For you have relinquished what I still own
We share a world in which we choose,
Between the things we love and hate
But once you've chosen to close your eyes
Its your own fault, that you've no longer a fate
Think of the tears that you made
The lives you changed, the lives you hurt
But what do you care? These words no longer serenade
Your sight is gone, and to you this poem has no worth
It wasn't worth what you have done
You reached incorrectly, and pulled the wrong way
Now never more, shall you see the sun
You put your soul up for grabs, marking your last day
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TheWildBeliever
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2010-09-26 02:04:06]
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Re: Victim of Your Own Hands
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:04:50 AM AEST
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| A very profound piece of writing. The subject is sad but you deal with it sensitively with your well chosen words, very good writing well done. |
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Re: Victim of Your Own Hands
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by DayLilly on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 06:04:23 PM AEST
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| i agree:) |
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Re: Victim of Your Own Hands
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by williamdye on
Sunday, 17th October 2010 @ 12:08:28 PM AEST
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| Do not be angry at the person who killed them self. You absolutely have to be in their shoes to understand only what they felt. |
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